Hi Kameron! I really like your pictures and think your doing really well! To start off I think your Project Proposal that you wrote about your mom was so sweet and kind and I love that your using her as your subject!
The picture of the sink with the water coming out is definitely my favorite. It is so clear and crisp and by the background being blurred out, it makes the picture even better. I also like how detailed the picture is by even being able to see the little water drops. The picture right below that is great as well. I can't tell if she's singing or yelling at you but I can feel the emotion there! I like your last picture because of the angle that you did instead of just standing up and taking the picture. Were able to see her from a different POV. I also think the lighting is great because around your mom (the walls/couch) it's very bright but where your mom is at is much darker giving off a different mood.
I suggest for this to maybe move your last picture to the top so that both pictures of your mom doing yoga are together and that your creating a story going down each picture (which you do for the sink pictures). Lastly would be on your second to last picture to maybe change your F-stop. It's very bright on the sink area and makes it look blurry.
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Hi Kameron! I really like your pictures and think your doing really well! To start off I think your Project Proposal that you wrote about your mom was so sweet and kind and I love that your using her as your subject!
ReplyDeleteThe picture of the sink with the water coming out is definitely my favorite. It is so clear and crisp and by the background being blurred out, it makes the picture even better. I also like how detailed the picture is by even being able to see the little water drops. The picture right below that is great as well. I can't tell if she's singing or yelling at you but I can feel the emotion there! I like your last picture because of the angle that you did instead of just standing up and taking the picture. Were able to see her from a different POV. I also think the lighting is great because around your mom (the walls/couch) it's very bright but where your mom is at is much darker giving off a different mood.
I suggest for this to maybe move your last picture to the top so that both pictures of your mom doing yoga are together and that your creating a story going down each picture (which you do for the sink pictures). Lastly would be on your second to last picture to maybe change your F-stop. It's very bright on the sink area and makes it look blurry.
Overall really good job!!