I liked your use of lines in the first photo. They create a lot of contrast against the dark background. The two things that would have made this image stand out a bit more would be if the focal point was a bit more clear, and if the framing was adjusted to not have the lights going off the edges. The photo still has a lot of visual consistency and I think the pattern with the breaks in the lines is interesting.
I liked the second photo a bit more because of the reflections from the lights against the wall. I think this also made for a very interesting pattern. I think the framing could have improved the photo if the image had negative space on the left side the same way it does on the right.
Overall I really liked what you were going for with the lights and the background color. I think they blended together well and created a relaxing mood in each image.
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Hi Kam,
ReplyDeleteI liked your use of lines in the first photo. They create a lot of contrast against the dark background. The two things that would have made this image stand out a bit more would be if the focal point was a bit more clear, and if the framing was adjusted to not have the lights going off the edges. The photo still has a lot of visual consistency and I think the pattern with the breaks in the lines is interesting.
I liked the second photo a bit more because of the reflections from the lights against the wall. I think this also made for a very interesting pattern. I think the framing could have improved the photo if the image had negative space on the left side the same way it does on the right.
Overall I really liked what you were going for with the lights and the background color. I think they blended together well and created a relaxing mood in each image.